Mato Seihei no Slave - Vol. 17 Ch. 138 - A Turbulent First Day

[maruftim]

so no head?

 

[darkmatter923]

Fuck you Ren haters 🖕🖕🖕. I hope she goes full Homelander on your favourite waifu in the next chapter. The only thing that’s gonna humble her is belly rubs by Yuuki.

Well, fuck you for your shit taste in characters!

 

[HerrDoctor]

We are here for the exposing of the old hag and her goons. Going by Ren's last expression, she either knows about this or is just upset they're directly going against her. Well, excitement in either case.

Also. I showed some peeps the cock blocking panel and one asked: what is the female equivalent of blue balls? Kek. I never understand people who set up these scenes only to cut it at the last second for... comedic effect? Either their a masochist or a sadist. I'd also bet they make such explicit art on their own time for their own use.

Also also what is with the discourse between Ren fans and Ren haters? Gotta stay civil gang. We're all chilling here. She's one of my favorites, so I am biased, but I don't think it fair to consider her a bad character just because she's cocky. Like isn't a trait like that adding a lil spice? Sheesh.

 

[GiggityGiggity69]

Well, fuck you for your shit taste in characters!

Well at least she isn’t a shameless thirsty rapist or a cuck queen

 

[darkmatter923]

Well at least she isn’t a shameless thirsty rapist or a cuck queen

Yeah, the rapist isn't a great character, either, but she's not insufferably prideful, either, and does not yet need to be knocked down a peg.

 

[darkmatter923]

We are here for the exposing of the old hag and her goons. Going by Ren's last expression, she either knows about this or is just upset they're directly going against her. Well, excitement in either case.

Also. I showed some peeps the cock blocking panel and one asked: what is the female equivalent of blue balls? Kek. I never understand people who set up these scenes only to cut it at the last second for... comedic effect? Either their a masochist or a sadist. I'd also bet they make such explicit art on their own time for their own use.

Also also what is with the discourse between Ren fans and Ren haters? Gotta stay civil gang. We're all chilling here. She's one of my favorites, so I am biased, but I don't think it fair to consider her a bad character just because she's cocky. Like isn't a trait like that adding a lil spice? Sheesh.

WHAT is there to like about Ren? She's a prideful bitch who looks down on everyone around her, and there's noting less attractive in a character than that. It's possible to write cocky characters who are fun and likable and not emotionally abusive to their juniors, but Ren is not those things. She adds drama, but she's absolutely insufferable. I argue that one can write characters who one loves to hate without actually hating their existence. And the thing about cocky characters is that while they are assured in their skills, they are fully capable of being humbled by someone potentially better then them, and you find yourself rooting for them because they overcome any potential rivals by their own skill, intelligence and grit, reinforcing to the reader and characters why they are so cocky in the first place. Cockiness must be established, then earned when pitted against conflict. Ren is neither especially skilled nor intelligent (especially if there are so many potential candidates who are implied to do a much better job than her). What she's got going for her is nothing but raw, canon-breaking power, and that's simply not interesting. The universe is tilted in her favor, and not even the Internet's favorite subject of power-scaling criticism, Superman, has that going for him. Superman is very powerful, but he's not the bestest evar at everything he does, and he's FAR from the most powerful hero, to say nothing of the many aliens and gods who can match or exceed him. Thus far, it has not even been implied that Ren has anyone approaching her level, and so we are frustrated by the lack of challenge that anyone can possibly present her.
In short, she's a bitch to everyone and she is in DESPERATE need of a humbling, but at this point, anyone or anything that the author can possibly write to challenge her will inevitably feel like an ass-pull.

 

[HerrDoctor]

WHAT is there to like about Ren? She's a prideful bitch who looks down on everyone around her, and there's noting less attractive in a character than that. It's possible to write cocky characters who are fun and likable and not emotionally abusive to their juniors, but Ren is not those things. She adds drama, but she's absolutely insufferable. I argue that one can write characters who one loves to hate without actually hating their existence. And the thing about cocky characters is that while they are assured in their skills, they are fully capable of being humbled by someone potentially better then them, and you find yourself rooting for them because they overcome any potential rivals by their own skill, intelligence and grit, reinforcing to the reader and characters why they are so cocky in the first place. Cockiness must be established, then earned when pitted against conflict. Ren is neither especially skilled nor intelligent (especially if there are so many potential candidates who are implied to do a much better job than her). What she's got going for her is nothing but raw, canon-breaking power, and that's simply not interesting. The universe is tilted in her favor, and not even the Internet's favorite subject of power-scaling criticism, Superman, has that going for him. Superman is very powerful, but he's not the bestest evar at everything he does, and he's FAR from the most powerful hero, to say nothing of the many aliens and gods who can match or exceed him. Thus far, it has not even been implied that Ren has anyone approaching her level, and so we are frustrated by the lack of challenge that anyone can possibly present her.
In short, she's a bitch to everyone and she is in DESPERATE need of a humbling, but at this point, anyone or anything that the author can possibly write to challenge her will inevitably feel like an ass-pull.

Buddy is malding. Ain't no way you typed up all that. I ain't reading it bro am sorry.

 

[HerrDoctor]

Yeah, the rapist isn't a great character, either, but she's not insufferably prideful, either, and does not yet need to be knocked down a peg.

I mean if we getting down to it the sexual assault one is worse than the prideful one. There is no crime for being prideful. None at all. The other thing, on the other hand.. I mean I still like Tenka, but seriously, saying this? That's just not right.

 

[HerrDoctor]

On the other hand Kyouka is still refusing that she want to fuck MC.

Using that isn't the best at all. It's always the long running pair that ends up together. Kyouka is focused, but she has feelings, now it is time to build on those feelings. In due time she will become way more open and touchy feely. Sure, he likes Tenka but there is always a hesitation towards her.

 

[GiggityGiggity69]

Yeah, the rapist isn't a great character, either, but she's not insufferably prideful, either, and does not yet need to be knocked down a peg.

So you’re a Cuckyouka simp. Bitter cuz her ability is mid? Or she bland and uninteresting? Or it took 3 polls and showing her asspulls in every chapter and an anime adaptation to get acknowledged by the fandom?Or perhaps do ye have a cuck fetish?
Regardless she’ll be sitting on the cuck chair throughout this arc.

Edit: Some ren hater reported me so my other comment is yet to be approved by mods. Reply to the big thesis that you have written here.


Damn she lives rent free in your head. Time to find a job brother. Impossible to read this whole thing that you’ve been yapping.

Anyways

Lifes Apex✅

Earth’s Answer✅

Drop Dead Gorgeous ✅

Looks dom but lowkey sub ✅

Superior Abilities ✅

Highly Arrogant ✅

Acts like a crazy possessive girlfriend ✅

Hates late replies ✅

She’s so graceful that a thunder god imitated her look and she even got cosplayed in another manga.
REN IS HER

And if your Hurtbutt is trying to find dEePeR reasonings in a softcore porno manga, more reason that you go and find that job quickly, and probably read shoujo mangas instead.

 

[darkmatter923]

So you’re a Cuckyouka simp. Bitter cuz her ability is mid? Or she bland and uninteresting? Or it took 3 polls and showing her asspulls in every chapter and an anime adaptation to get acknowledged by the fandom?Or perhaps do ye have a cuck fetish?
Regardless she’ll be sitting on the cuck chair throughout this arc.

Edit: Some ren hater reported me so my other comment is yet to be approved by mods. Reply to the big thesis that you have written here.


Damn she lives rent free in your head. Time to find a job brother. Impossible to read this whole thing that you’ve been yapping.

Anyways

Lifes Apex✅

Earth’s Answer✅

Drop Dead Gorgeous ✅

Looks dom but lowkey sub ✅

Superior Abilities ✅

Highly Arrogant ✅

Acts like a crazy possessive girlfriend ✅

Hates late replies ✅

She’s so graceful that a thunder god imitated her look and she even got cosplayed in another manga.
REN IS HER

And if your Hurtbutt is trying to find dEePeR reasonings in a softcore porno manga, more reason that you go and find that job quickly, and probably read shoujo mangas instead.

What the actual fuck are you talking about? Are you capable of stringing together a coherent thought?

 

[darkmatter923]

Buddy is malding. Ain't no way you typed up all that. I ain't reading it bro am sorry.

I'm sorry you need a TLDR to engage in debate.

 

[legendaryswordsman]

Feels like a Tenka death flag. Suddenly trying to clear potential regrets.

I do worry about that too but before that I think we would have to see what transformation she would give to mc

 

[legendaryswordsman]

I know it was too good to be true but I still believed.

Yeah they always get interrupted it sucks she genuinely loves him. Though I think some of the women have developed feelings for him too

 

[GiggityGiggity69]

What the actual fuck are you talking about? Are you capable of stringing together a coherent thought?

I have though, but you don’t seem to comprehend it. You’re even dumber than your pfp.

 

[darkmatter923]

I have though, but you don’t seem to comprehend it. You’re even dumber than your pfp.

No u
You're too lazy to even get yourself a profile picture. Congrats, you played yourself.

 

[alfirizkyr]

Ren is hot, but she definitely needs to be pegged be kicked down a peg. Worse yet if she really did know about the Onmyou deal. It's a she said she said situation at the moment and I have no idea how Kyouka and Tenka plan to walk out of this alive.

 

[HerrDoctor]

Ren is hot, but she definitely needs to be pegged be kicked down a peg. Worse yet if she really did know about the Onmyou deal. It's a she said she said situation at the moment and I have no idea how Kyouka and Tenka plan to walk out of this alive.

I agree with "Ren is hot".

 

[Wildfire_desu]

the politiqueing in this manga is horseshit, it make no sense. this guy should've actually tried at all, or stuck with drawing porn doujinshi instead. would've made way more money, too.

 

[Deathhappens]

GOD FUCKING DAMN IT YAKUMO