Few errors here. Page 5: A sports team dropped* by today so we ran out of milk.
Page 6, I think it's more "I'd feel bad" rather than I feel bad. Same page, "I shall oblige" is much better than "obliged".
"Since I sweated [...]"... Well, that can be said, but I'd rather see "Since I worked up a sweat [...]".
You might wanna recheck your grammar Squiggy! Else it's back to school with you!