Me-Teru no Kimochi - Vol. 3 Ch. 28

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That final panel, makes no sense. If they are implying that the child is his and hers from six years ago why did they draw the child running past him while saying daddy. The perspective is all wrong.

Oh wait ... now I get it. The other lady is the mom? But then the perspective of the last panel makes even less sense. Either I need to get my eyes checked or the artist needs to take a few more lessons in perspective.

Edit: I know what is it about that last panel ... the shadows fucked up the entire thing. There is no way that her shadow should be in front of his from this angle and the angle of the sun.
 
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Seems like MC married his co-worker in the ramen shop and had a child with her. Really loved the interaction between two main characters as well as the father, it's a good ending of a bittersweet story, though iffy on the pacing but decent overall.
 
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From the author of Gantz and Gigant...I can see the similarity of character design. I really enjoyed this despite it being a bitter sweet ending.
Not much more to say other than the artwork had me totally absorbed in the scenes and the mood and I kind of felt like I was in Japan for the entire duration of the reading only to be swiftly deported back to my home country on the last page turn. Awesome stuff.
 
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This story wasn't so good...
I can see now why Kiroya Oku had to deal with so much criticism when he wrote that.
 
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I liked this story a lot, but boy did they rush the ending. I had to decipher what happened in the last chapter which really lessened the emotional impact of the whole thing. I can tell it was originally meant to happen at the same pace as the rest of the manga.
Still, I'm happy to see our boy finally become a gigachad.
 
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Though feels a bit rushed nearing the end, it’s overall a decent read.
 

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