Meccha Shoukan Sareta Ken - Vol. 4 Ch. 15

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Of course, the story pace will stretch 30 second for a rapping monologue. Of course. Of course.
 
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The moment Inori appeared didn't carry any sense of relief or satisfaction with it for me. I was actually expecting Aliyah to give up the ghost and say something like "Nara, I'll join you soon" after being grievously wounded mere seconds before her enemies start dying horribly. I don't think this counts as a rescue, not with her on the verge of death like that. This was a predatory action on Inori's part, feeding on the soldiers as his prey with Aliyah as convenient bait.

With friends like Inori, who needs enemies? Oh yeah, they're not friends too. Right, this is an edgy power fantasy devoid of friendship and trust. I'm actually having mixed feelings about keeping Aliyah alive, on one hand, it seems like a mercy to let her die rather than continue living with her gaining freedom, but losing just about everything else in exchange. If she wants revenge, I don't know if she can rely on, let alone trust someone like Inori to help with it. She'll have to do it on her own.
 
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HOL'UP.

Why did he show up?

Seriously, why the fuck is he there?

Thousands of possibilities and opportunities to save Nara and the princess and bunches of other people, and now he feels like saving this chick?
She's already bleeding, and that means he no longer cares in any way.

She's dead to him, now; just like everybody else, she's bleeding and to him that means "dead."
Also, she is of no USE, which is the only thing this utter piece of shit is capable of thinking about.

She gets chopped up, he escapes, or maybe goes to "ThE StRoNKiSt" blonde cunt and hangs out with her until he let's her die, but either way, there is no point for an inhuman loser like this fucking retard to give a shit about her.

This is probably the kind of writer who needs to be dragged through a sewer; tie a rope around his tummy, and drag him through a clogged sewer-pipe until he looks like his own soul: covered in shit, piss, vomit, and gummy, rotting hair.
 
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HOL'UP.

Why did he show up?

Seriously, why the fuck is he there?

Thousands of possibilities and opportunities to save Nara and the princess and bunches of other people, and now he feels like saving this chick?
She's already bleeding, and that means he no longer cares in any way.

She's dead to him, now; just like everybody else, she's bleeding and to him that means "dead."
Also, she is of no USE, which is the only thing this utter piece of shit is capable of thinking about.

She gets chopped up, he escapes, or maybe goes to "ThE StRoNKiSt" blonde cunt and hangs out with her until he let's her die, but worher way, there is no point for an inhuman loser like this fucking retard to give a shit about her.

This is probably the lind of writer who needs to be dragged through a sewer; tie a rope around his tummy, and drag him through a clogged sewer-pipe until he looks like his own soul: covered in shit, piss, vomit, and gummy, rotting hair.
are you genuinely fucked in the head? how the fuck did he have thousands of chances to save her if it wasn’t night time yet? and that last comment is fucking abhorrent mate you need to get your head checked
 
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are you genuinely fucked in the head? how the fuck did he have thousands of chances to save her if it wasn’t night time yet? and that last comment is fucking abhorrent mate you need to get your head checked
What, you want me to go page-by-page and explain how easily he could have resolved this issue?
It would be a damn novel!

Over and over again this character has gone out of his way to demonstrate his lack of fucks about other people, and been uncaring regarding dire consequences; he plainly doesn't give a shit about anybody but himself.

As for the abhorrence of my commentary, I've got to wonder: is it the gross description, or the criticism of the writing?
Because the description is intentionally vile to match the lack of compassion and humanity in the story; but the writing is a story about a deeply uncaring being, and I stand by my criticism of it.
 
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MC sucks and the sunlight weakness is just insane. Cheat skills == weaker than dog crap in the day... what's the point of having cheat skills then? You're so, so, so easy to kill, and you deserve to die. MC is the worst kind of scum. I would hope he would be in a mental hospital on a permanent basis if he was in our world. Feed bro a massive amount of lithium and keep him permanently doped to the gills.
 
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so now that this is like my third time rereading this no thanks in part to the horrendously amazing upload rate of everyone's favorite scan group
obviously this is sarcasm. i mean who the fuck likes degen scans.
i noticed that the guards look a lot like characters from ren and stimpy.

STANDING HERE I REALISE YOU WERE JUST LIKE ME TRYING TO MAKE HISTORY ...
 

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