Midari ni Midara na Kuroyukihime Online - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Infatuation with the God’s Speed Blade

[MangaDex]

 

[AthK]

Are you going to continue and complete this series??

 

[Konesho]

Hello guys, I'm the leader of Lewdinburg. Sorry this release took forever...
We are planning to complete the series but we have been super low on typesetters so I ended up having to typeset it myself.
If anyone is interested in helping with typesetting we can release a lot quicker, since we actually already have the entirety of Volume 1 translated and cleaned. lol
Anyways, if no one comes ill probably typeset chapter 5 myself. QQ
Thanks for reading, remember to support the original creators!

Link to discord:
https://discord.gg/vTTWAEf

 

[ICYCOZY]

Holy shite, its gonna continue. Its been so long...

@RockPaperCeasar Thanks for this guilty pleasure!

 

[KrimzonHawka]

@RockPaperCeasar Dedicated translation at last? Praise be you good people

 

[Hounder]

And this is why you are supposed to run. Hanging around is never a smart move,

 

[DrPavel]

Yeah boiiii

 

[Asynchria]

Page 19: it should be 'special effect', not 'affect'

Affect is something else

Thanks for the translation! Glad to see this series getting some new attention

 

[Konesho]

@Hezkezl
Thanks! Looks like we didn't catch that. I fixed it in the update.

 

[depzdai]

Thanks for the translation. Hope you'll keep pumping out this forgotten masterpiece.

 

[Hrien]

There's this weird duality of bad translations as well as trying to meme at the same time that kind of makes this kind of cringy.

For example, page 10 bubble 3 was translated to "The Betelgeuse subspecies has already been defeated!!!" except from context, you can tell that it isn't defeated yet. The original reads "息の合った華麗な動き！ベテル亜種ひるみまくりー!!", which the second sentence roughly translates to "The Betelgeuse subspecies is left reeling". Particularly, given the context that the game they're playing is a reference to Monster Hunter, ひるみまくり describes when an enemy has flinched and gives you a large window of opportunity in that game.

Contrast that to inserting AYLMAO in p20, and the Pokemon reference in p28 when the original has nothing to do with that.

I mean, there's inserting jokes where appropriate, there's making meme translations for fun, but there's just this whiplash where you've readjusted a lot of dialogue placement and wording for the sake of making things sound good in English (and to be fair, you have done pretty well in some places) but then can't be bothered to catch errors that's kind of glaring at you in the face if you read for cohesion.

 

[Konesho]

@Hrien
Thanks for your input, we have made the needed changes in the update.

 

[MiguelH224]

MC is literally the only normal one out of them....and why tf did FMC knock out the MC when they were giving introductions? That was so unnecessary

 

[under_reaper]

The mc is in the wrong naming dimension💀