Midwinter Ice Cream

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its sweet, like an ice cream in middle of rain(i life somewhere tropical, so i don't feel snow)
 
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The idea is good but it feels to sloppy. I love the Male Lead, he shows great maturity. But the FL seems too naive to me. Like a loner who gets jealous and wants attention? I’m not sure how to put it.

I prefer her to be a loner and distance, just like him and they both kick it from there.

I’ve read a lot of shoujos, some good, some bad, naive FLs seem the most common. I should had made a list of my favorites where they stay real in relationships or at least progress from their naiveness and realize how great he is
 

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