Mikogami Karen no Kakushigoto - Ch. 4

[MangaDex]

 

[pir0zhki]

Not bad for a first release, but some thoughts:

The font is.. Not very easy to read. It might be that the letters are just a bit too thin, so it might be worth trying to find a font more optimized for legibility.
There's a lot of text outside of bubbles in this series, and there's only so much the light white stroke can do for the thin lettering in this font. It gets pretty hard to read at times.

The watermark is kinda really obnoxious. The font you use for it is actually more legible than the one used for speech, being bolder and more rounded, so it actively draws the reader's eyes to it while trying to read the story, which can be very irritating.
There are times when it even overlaps other things on the page, like on pages 4 and 8, which really should never happen. Watermarks aren't remotely necessary to begin with, but if you feel you must use them, at least make them unintrusive -- they really should fade into the background relative to the page content and text, so the reader isn't constantly reminded that they're there.

 

[lucesenpai]

Not bad for a first release, but some thoughts:

The font is.. Not very easy to read. It might be that the letters are just a bit too thin, so it might be worth trying to find a font more optimized for legibility.
There's a lot of text outside of bubbles in this series, and there's only so much the light white stroke can do for the thin lettering in this font. It gets pretty hard to read at times.

The watermark is kinda really obnoxious. The font you use for it is actually more legible than the one used for speech, being bolder and more rounded, so it actively draws the reader's eyes to it while trying to read the story, which can be very irritating.
There are times when it even overlaps other things on the page, like on pages 4 and 8, which really should never happen. Watermarks aren't remotely necessary to begin with, but if you feel you must use them, at least make them unintrusive -- they really should fade into the background relative to the page content and text, so the reader isn't constantly reminded that they're there.

Thank you, I will try to change them in the future.

 

[yuki0907u]

@lucesenpai Please don’t make fun of me if you are making it . This was my very first translation and bla bla yada yada . I saw your other English versions to so please don’t lei .
or it’s just me being to self aware or something