p.14 "pisses of"
p.21 "ask for advise"
p.24 "it's cause" pronoun missing, I believe it's "I" but I'm not sure
in general, this is the first time QC feels subpar. And I struggled with translation somewhere in the middle
...about the chapter...well, I was very excited about it, but it feels...meh. I mean, do understanding Ojiya is evading type and his reactions feel natural...and off-putting. It's like, the craziness of the series went away and now it's casual romcom.
Good thing there are some bits of craziness left here and there, like Toyama at the end. She is cute when held by the scruff