Ah I shoulda caught those when I was proofreading, I'll pick up the slack next time@DarkTheFailure
> Page 7 - suppoed gave
> Page 17 - too litte
Also, that credit page
Thanks for the chapter nonetheless.
fixed now (minus the credit page I'm too lazy)@DarkTheFailure
> Page 7 - suppoed gave
> Page 17 - too litte
Also, that credit page
Thanks for the chapter nonetheless.
Page 3: tempature -> temperatureAh I shoulda caught those when I was proofreading, I'll pick up the slack next time
Holy crap I didn't know my spelling was that crap LMAO. Thanks for the response I fix them ASAP. Jesus I sometimes wonder if I do have dyslexia or something.Page 3: tempature -> temperature
Page 5: sutdents -> students
Page 7: unethusiastic -> unenthusiastic
Page 8: these 2 shown -> these 2 have shown (not completely sure about this one)
Page 10: becuase -> because
Page 12: delicous -> delicious
Page 13: aswell -> as well; afterall -> after all
Page 14: just that my parents... -> it's just that my parents...; is it that? -> is that it?
Page 15: delicous -> delicious
Page 16: unattened -> unattended; aswell -> as well;...this quick as more... ->...this quickly, as the more...
Page 17: an alcohol with a high alcohol content -> either "a spirit with a high alcohol content", "a high percentage spirit" or "a high proof alcohol". The last one "sounds" better, because English-speaking countries usually use "proof" to measure the alcoholic content, but since the manga use the percentage maybe go for one of the other two.
to it's storage place -> to its storage place; be a issue -> be an issue; in the beginning prepartion -> in the beginning of the preparation
Page 19: without issue -> without issues; "since he didn't see... so maybe..." -> remove either "since" or "so" (I suggest removing "so" considering the tone of the conversation)
Page 20: really surprising -> really surprising; that surprised -> that surprised
Page 24: suprised -> surprised
If you need help proofreading, I can at least give it a look, but I am not a native speaker eitherHoly crap I didn't know my spelling was that crap LMAO. Thanks for the response I fix them ASAP. Jesus I sometimes wonder if I do have dyslexia or something.
Fixed now. Going to be much more careful typesetting for the future and reread the stuff closer. Appreciate the help!Page 3: tempature -> temperature
Page 5: sutdents -> students
Page 7: unethusiastic -> unenthusiastic
Page 8: these 2 shown -> these 2 have shown (not completely sure about this one)
Page 10: becuase -> because
Page 12: delicous -> delicious
Page 13: aswell -> as well; afterall -> after all
Page 14: just that my parents... -> it's just that my parents...; is it that? -> is that it?
Page 15: delicous -> delicious
Page 16: unattened -> unattended; aswell -> as well;...this quick as more... ->...this quickly, as the more...
Page 17: an alcohol with a high alcohol content -> either "a spirit with a high alcohol content", "a high percentage spirit" or "a high proof alcohol". The last one "sounds" better, because English-speaking countries usually use "proof" to measure the alcoholic content, but since the manga use the percentage maybe go for one of the other two.
to it's storage place -> to its storage place; be a issue -> be an issue; in the beginning prepartion -> in the beginning of the preparation
Page 19: without issue -> without issues; "since he didn't see... so maybe..." -> remove either "since" or "so" (I suggest removing "so" considering the tone of the conversation)
Page 20: really suprising -> really surprising; that suprised -> that surprised
Page 24: suprised -> surprised