Miss Kitty and Her Bodyguards - Ch. 122 - A Territorial Dispute

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Some of my problems with this story is how the exposition is handled. Why does rosie stop in the middle of the fight to introduce herself to some random old man (bigman) about what's happening??? It'd make more sense to explain that through the dialogue between her and ronan and have us, the audience (plus bigman and harley) piece it together through that.

This is actually the chapter I originally dropped the series at because this bugged me so much, but I'm pushing though despite how cringe some of the dialogue is
 

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