Mizu Zokusei no Mahoutsukai - Ch. 12

[MangaDex]

 

[feha]

Several clearly incorrect bubbles. Like that I think was meant to say "wear down" became "wear don't"

 

[okasakisan]

Several clearly incorrect bubbles. Like that I think was meant to say "wear down" became "wear don't"

Not gonna lie, after working on the chapter for a couple hours i dont feel like reading it again for a while lol, but i did update it to fix the bubble you pointed out, i also fixed/reworded some bubbles in other 3 pages and im sure i probably didnt catch all the mistakes you saw lol, but as i said, this is not a professional work lol, but i do appreciate pointing out the mistakes.

i took a peek at the next chapter and something is finally going down.

 

[CruiserEgg97]

That meme page... :snort:

 

[Metasepia]

Heh, that's a funny meme page.

 

[okasakisan]

So, pages 27-28 felt so out of place at the end of chapter 12, and as i was working on chapter 13 those 2 pages kind of fit as the 3rd and 4th page lol so i will add them to the next chapter and you can be the judge.

 

[nuttyknight89]

Thanks for the chapter.

That said,
page 12: “This is the first time I see a sword l that“ should use “I’ve seen” or “I have seen”.
page 18: “This ice walls are pretty strong“ should be either ”These ice walls are” or “This ice wall is”.

Everything else seems fine. I’m not blaming you for missing some grammar, just wanted to help.

 

[okasakisan]

Thanks for the chapter.

That said,
page 12: “This is the first time I see a sword l that“ should use “I’ve seen” or “I have seen”.
page 18: “This ice walls are pretty strong“ should be either ”These ice walls are” or “This ice wall is”.

Everything else seems fine. I’m not blaming you for missing some grammar, just wanted to help.

Dont worry about it, i appreciate you or anyone else calling me out on those mistakes.

 

[Zacoras]

Can you complete the missing chapters?

 

[okasakisan]

Can you complete the missing chapters?

chapters 7-10 are in other sites so there is no point in me working on them and i was told by a Mod to not direct users to other sites, just do a quick google search and im sure you will find them.

 

[Elhao]

Of course, a sword style where you jump right into your target with your sword in both hands above your head and thus completely defenseless is made to avoid taking damage...