Mizu Zokusei no Mahoutsukai - Ch. 25

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Pace went right out the window on this one. A LOT of pages with nothing but dry exposition, and the few that actually had characters act didn't actually do much of anything.
What happened, even just visually speaking, at the gate site is not clear. Was is someone coming out of the gate? A researcher-turned-traitor? Was there a beat-skip between panels or did everyone just go poof in an instant? Someone in a white cloak did something, in the middle of a lot of people wearing white cloaks. No distinct anything.
 
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Pace went right out the window on this one. A LOT of pages with nothing but dry exposition, and the few that actually had characters act didn't actually do much of anything.
What happened, even just visually speaking, at the gate site is not clear. Was is someone coming out of the gate? A researcher-turned-traitor? Was there a beat-skip between panels or did everyone just go poof in an instant? Someone in a white cloak did something, in the middle of a lot of people wearing white cloaks. No distinct anything.
from what I can tell: someone touched the gate and everyone inside of the dungeon vanished
 
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Yeah the action between the "thud" and the empty cave was unclear to me. I can't even tell what object made the thud. Is it a rock, someone's robe, a dropped equipment? Oh well. There wasn't much water in this chapter, lack of moisture
 
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The artist really wanted to get as much "mileage" as possible from those two drawings of Christopher's face.
 
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Pace went right out the window on this one. A LOT of pages with nothing but dry exposition, and the few that actually had characters act didn't actually do much of anything.
What happened, even just visually speaking, at the gate site is not clear. Was is someone coming out of the gate? A researcher-turned-traitor? Was there a beat-skip between panels or did everyone just go poof in an instant? Someone in a white cloak did something, in the middle of a lot of people wearing white cloaks. No distinct anything.
Honestly I’ve been feeling like a lot of the chapters have been nothing but exposition dumps for a while, kind of dissapointing.
 
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The artist finally added backgrounds to most of the chapter but that made it worse since we had no backgrounds previously so no idea if people are close to previously shown character’s locations lol
 
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The english equivalent of a monster tsunami would be a stampede. So it would probably be better translated as a great stampede.
 
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I started translating this chapter after i uploaded 24 but the exposition was so much that i got bored and didnt touch it ever since lol, great work toughing it out.
 

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