Mizuho Ambivalent

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Huh so warning:
The main character starts she story basically talking about how she is trans and then it turns out that she isn't because reasons. really dumb reasons. So just a warning if that's going to be a disappointment.

Other than that its ok I guess. Not good but ok.
 
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Good story concept and writing but reading through it becomes incredibly frustrating as the entire conflict is just a loop of Mizuho's conflict of dating Alice as a girl/crossdresser?(Honestly not sure if he's supposed to be trans/bigender,ect or simply just wants to be called a girl for the sake of being perceived as extremely feminine), become a guy to be her prince because for some reason he can't fully comprehend being with Alice as is despite the mutual attraction they have as girls/crossdresser x girl?) and not being with her because he wants to remain a girl/crossdresser?
The ending is pretty bad as he decides to just hard stop crossdressing and be a boy despite Alice saying she loves him as a girl and a boy... Like you clearly still enjoy being a girl and she just said she likes you both ways too... Why are you stopping? The realistic ending of this story should have either been him staying a crossdresser/girl full time or ending in a bigender/genderfluid ending, it's clear from the beginning that Mizuho preffers being feminine and from the Beginning says he would date a girl as a girl, the plotline of him returning to fulltime boy-mode is a complete contradiction to everything he's shown to be in this story and there's no reason forcing him to make a hardline decision against his nature like that such as Alice only being willing to date him as a guy and him willing to do it for love. Overall the ending is just stupid in every way.
 

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