Mizutama Puzzle

[MangaDex]

 

[FluffyTwilight]

not sure why this already has bad reviews, so far it seems like a good story with good art. don't often see a romance with an older female/younger male that's not plagued with fan service, so it's nice to see. Really into Watashi no Shounen, and I'm sensing a similar vibe to this for now.

 

[VoidR]

lol, whoever uploaded chap 2 at the same time as i did, and then also deleted theirs at the same time i deleted mine cause we both saw there was a dupe, you can upload it

edit: been a bit, so i guess ill be the one to upload it then

 

[Ratkes]

why is it so short? This could have been great. I mean it is great, but it could have been longer.

 

[FluffyTwilight]

Wow, I actually really really liked that. I'm glad it explored both perspectives in a stalkerish/obsessive/silently observant person situation without completely shutting them down and judging them forever on it. I do like that she recognizes it for what it is and stands up for herself, which is pretty rare in manga/anime. Obviously, in reality, in most cases, her actions are smart and would totally be encouraged for safety, or that most people who exhibit stalking/obsessive tendencies can be quite dangerous and should be cut off, however, it's always bothered me that the "stalker's" perspective is hardly explored, that guilt and acknowledgement of having done wrong but being expected to never try to explain or make contact after being labeled and judged for their actions which may have been abnormal is definitely a struggle which I wish was explored more. The situation itself is pretty realistic, however, the ending while appreciated is rare and unrealistic. Kinda got a mix of a Kimi wa Pet, Sachi-iro no One Room, and Watashi no Shounen vibe from this.

 

[Moodyz]

Started better than it ended.

 

[readergaunt]

Stalking ain't cool...

This tries to go the , "but he is stalking her through the rain! He is so devoted!" bit, but its still him being clingy...

It only works out in the end because, it's a manga, or other bad media.

 

[VoidR]

redacted

 

[firefox1234]

Kids don’t try this at home....

 

[GruntZone360]

Leaves you wanting more + attention to detail (10)

 

[simplicity]

I feel like this was axed. It seemed like the author was setting up for a detailed story but then had to just abruptly end it. About the stalking part....

Spoiler

Sure, what he did wasn't cool, but if he really wanted to stalk her seriously he would've just followed her home instead of waiting out in the open like that.

I think overall the feelings came through, but it would've been much better as a one or two volume story.

 

[RoseareViolet]

got this on random,the stalker part is creepy as i know how it feel
i think it got axed because there a really good backstory
wish there was more

 

[JaeScans]

Beautiful art, story about how 2 random people can meet. I thought he was too pushy, though.

 

[Dyn_Whitleford]

Damn.. it's so annoying this great art just 2shot! I want moreeeeee Xc

Thanks for translate this manga

 

[raccoonshouse]

I'm sad it's ended in only 2 chapters. I feel like I would like to know more about the main characters.

 

[Jackone]

Fucking good. Hopes it be longer and he was a bit of stalker kinda