The Story could be good if the Characters had any form of expression, there is no change whatsoever.
The Story itself feels completly random, almost as if there were just a few things mashed toghether.
Metteing the army after aprox 5 days, oh Survivos maybe they are Murim Master, how the hell do they know a therm wich probalby is created in the far Future...
This one could have ben good but as it stands now it willer never be anything else then a time sink.