Momo Kanchou no Himitsu Kichi
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hello.
french here.
the name of the spacecraft "bleu château" would probably translate best to "blue castle" (we have a word for fortress, which is "forteresse"), but in french to say a castle is blue, you'd say "un château bleu" or "ce château est bleu". inverting "château" and "bleu" is somewhat either strange or part of a sophisticated sentence, like a poem.
second, "peche de vigne" is yes, litterally grape peach, i found something on google about grape peach being a special kind of peach. that's the meaning in "peche de vigne", it's a kind of peach somewhat flattened and with more colorful flesh. supposed to be less calibrated and more "wild", growing between the vine. hence the name.
and while i'm at it :
the way we pronounce things in french, because it wouldn't be complicated enough otherwise :
E+U = E
A+U = E+A+U = O
idk if it's the author or a typo, but "chateu" looks and sounds a little silly
thank you for picking up this work from wandering emanon's author.
french here.
the name of the spacecraft "bleu château" would probably translate best to "blue castle" (we have a word for fortress, which is "forteresse"), but in french to say a castle is blue, you'd say "un château bleu" or "ce château est bleu". inverting "château" and "bleu" is somewhat either strange or part of a sophisticated sentence, like a poem.
second, "peche de vigne" is yes, litterally grape peach, i found something on google about grape peach being a special kind of peach. that's the meaning in "peche de vigne", it's a kind of peach somewhat flattened and with more colorful flesh. supposed to be less calibrated and more "wild", growing between the vine. hence the name.
and while i'm at it :
the way we pronounce things in french, because it wouldn't be complicated enough otherwise :
E+U = E
A+U = E+A+U = O
idk if it's the author or a typo, but "chateu" looks and sounds a little silly
thank you for picking up this work from wandering emanon's author.
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Why does this have the erotica tag?
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Love this series so much ❤️ one of a scant few I've rated 10/10
More thanks than I can express for your hard work, @Majin_Vizard
More thanks than I can express for your hard work, @Majin_Vizard
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Not really a spoiler, talking about what I see as aspect that I think leads it to be a 7 star work instead of an 8 star, and also my thoughts on making a similar work.
So, a critical mistake you can do in a work is mention a "timelimit" too early. This absolutely kills the drive of many readers to continue reading your work as they think "I'm close to the end, but I don't want this work to end so let's drop it here to give it a proper send off (that'll never happen)". You could make it achieve the opposite, but only after appropriate build-up to make them want to continue reading start to end (you'll still lose people if you're slow at updating or don't release in bulk)
I honestly see alot of potential for this work, but instead of single-person interstellar travel, the MC works as a cargo technician at a space station (yes ss13, cause Cargonia reigns supreme).
Otherwise you could go the space-opera action route and talk about how the MC found a way to create various armaments and eventually makes their own station/company/nation.
Alot of potential, but I think the author was intending to showcase their art more than story-telling, as such the work falls short.
I appreciate the telling of a potential corporate future, but I don't think this is the most fitting media for this type of story, it'd be better as a literary work with sketched art, or just with more storytelling about the scifi world instead of just short life of girl in spaceship
So, a critical mistake you can do in a work is mention a "timelimit" too early. This absolutely kills the drive of many readers to continue reading your work as they think "I'm close to the end, but I don't want this work to end so let's drop it here to give it a proper send off (that'll never happen)". You could make it achieve the opposite, but only after appropriate build-up to make them want to continue reading start to end (you'll still lose people if you're slow at updating or don't release in bulk)
I honestly see alot of potential for this work, but instead of single-person interstellar travel, the MC works as a cargo technician at a space station (yes ss13, cause Cargonia reigns supreme).
Otherwise you could go the space-opera action route and talk about how the MC found a way to create various armaments and eventually makes their own station/company/nation.
Alot of potential, but I think the author was intending to showcase their art more than story-telling, as such the work falls short.
I appreciate the telling of a potential corporate future, but I don't think this is the most fitting media for this type of story, it'd be better as a literary work with sketched art, or just with more storytelling about the scifi world instead of just short life of girl in spaceship
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I swear this series is just an excuse for Tsuruta to draw naked Emanon (in space).
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Yeah I was interested in reading but the always naked thing gets annoying when trying read with anyone around.
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Does anyone know the status of volume 2 or anything after ch 16? I hope this story isn't dead :/
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Aye I'm all for it lmao
