Momose Akira no Hatsukoi Hatan-chuu. - Ch. 1.1 - All that page 20 handwriting scanlated

[MangaDex]

 

[Hmmmmmmmmmmmm]

Seems like a pain in the ass

 

[tottori]

random TL notes (yes, for just one page. it was a lot of scribbles)

A takoyaki party is when you get a takoyaki grilling machine, a bunch of takoyaki batter, and a bunch of various ingredients and you hang out and make tasty junk food for a few hours.

"This year is crucial for success!" was "kono 1-nen ga shoubu", literally "this year is victory or defeat". Shoubu is the kanji for victory 勝 and the kanji for defeat 負 put together and generally connotes a situation where there's no middle ground between total success and utter failure. It pops up in other places like the word for gambler (shoubushi) and the old "lucky underwear" trope (shoubu shitagi).

The master checklist makes another appearance in chapter 3, so I threw in the note that appears in the spot where the text block was because I just thought it looked weird completely empty.

 

[Medic329]

And don't let him find out there's a script!!

Surely this isn't foreshadowing Hajime eventually running into this script someday or another...

 

[nivleot]

Damn bro nice work

 

[casual_reader1234]

Thanks for translating all of that! It was really cute and also admirable seeing how committed she is to connecting with her crush, even without understanding what any of that said. Love how much she hypes herself up (and how supportive her friends are). She might want to work on her tone and expressions first though lol

 

[telefonevoador]

Absolutely love it
Good on you with the motivation

PS that makes me chuckle: IMPORTANT! ↓
unfortunately blocked Japanese text

 

[biologist]

W-What will happen in the third year?

 

[77px]

This is cute. Enjoying this series thusfar, and efforts like this add to the enjoyment all the moreso. Thanks for your translation.

 

[casual_reader1234]

Seems like a pain in the ass

Her, or the translating? Because "" if former, "" if the latter

 

[UnvalidUserName]

I can't wait to see how she continues to fuck this steps up

 

[Hmmmmmmmmmmmm]

Her, or the translating? Because "" if former, "" if the latter

I meant scanslating, I could never. Hence why I said it seems like a pain in the ass

 

[Metaldrum]

The car part is mistranslated. Under 高3 it says "やりたい事できたら追加していく！！".

 

[Sagara-Sousuke]

Handholding in the first year ?

 

[casual_reader1234]

I meant scanslating, I could never. Hence why I said it seems like a pain in the ass

Same.

 

[leaf2fire]

W-What will happen in the third year?

My guess:

• キスKiss
• 旅行Trip/旅館Ryokan
• 夜Overnight
• セSe-
• 手Hands
• 色々Various/色気Sex appeal

 

[Chuito]

Oh lord this is aggressively adorable and innocent.

I love her character already and hope for more failed scripts backfiring but at the same time habing better results than expected

 

[Nemo2342]

You absolute madman; bless you for this.

 

[Stadenwick]

Bro my soul ain't made for something so pure and earnest I can feel it dragged down to hell in shame by the light this one page produced

 

[Kagg50]

The third year looking suspicious as there’s a letter that begins from 「セ」 and as an cultured person the only words which begins from that letter is ‘have sex with him’ 「セックスする」