Or make it really, really small so that you'd have to be looking for them or find them on a second pass.There are a small typos here and there, but overall good work.
P.S.
Don't add these comments mid chapter. Those really break the immersion and are annoying for some (add these when you want to explain something. Like for example there is a dish and you explain what that dish is)
He seems to have a lot of agility and dexterity, but unfortunately the meta heavily favors strength builds.With the power of love, he did a one handed upside down jack split, while holding onto crutches while that crutches was balancing on a bed.
How has he not won a sports day?
If your car is parked and a motorcycle is crashes into your car at speed and the rider is hospitalized, is it your fault?They're really gonna blame him for his injuries despite that Red Team guy throwing him down, huh? What bull.
Also, pretty sure her friend was meant to say his name in that boyfriend line, not hers.