Mone-san no Majime Sugiru Tsukiaikata - Vol. 6 Ch. 56 - Peep Shot 3

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This manga had so very much potential; then the author's writing gradually became more and more retarded with each mob he gave Mone's focus to.

The moral of this arc (that has gone on for far too long: like I've said, the mobs all have way more spotlight time than the lead girl Mone herself--such that it can be measured in chapters) is that "psychopathic homewreckers are deserving of love, too~!" That's what the author is conveying, here. Reasonably enough, that sharktoothed psychopath was saved by someone of the same stripe.

EDIT: What's the matter, Gem-Bug? Are you too simple to engage intelligently? Or are you afraid?

Seems that it's not just him.
 
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saw-toothed, short-stacked prez is literally too cute.

Also, the yandere senpai being the stalker is something we should've seen a mile away :kek:
 
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can this arc be over with
I'm here for Yozakura Momone from the Mone-san no Majime Sugiru Tsukiaikata series
Yes, this arc is over but there wont be a Mone centered arc until chapter 63.

If you are just here to only see Mone then you better go, the series have long switched format to arcs were every member of the harem gets a spot in a chapter or so, some times it will be longer but its not as of the rest of the harem will go away.

Also I dont get why people think you can have a series with just a couple because that doesnt really work, Nagatoro have long been focused on other issues, Akutsu is foremost a comedy series as the same with other series because by itself the romance can only provide as much before it runs out. Either people are just trolling or they dont understand that a strictly romance series will veer into melodrama if it remains focused on a single relationship.

Besides this have long switched to a harem format, complaining about it at this stage is kinda odd isnt it?
 
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Yes, this arc is over but there wont be a Mone centered arc until chapter 63.

If you are just here to only see Mone then you better go, the series have long switched format to arcs were every member of the harem gets a spot in a chapter or so, some times it will be longer but its not as of the rest of the harem will go away.

Also I dont get why people think you can have a series with just a couple because that doesnt really work, Nagatoro have long been focused on other issues, Akutsu is foremost a comedy series as the same with other series because by itself the romance can only provide as much before it runs out. Either people are just trolling or they dont understand that a strictly romance series will veer into melodrama if it remains focused on a single relationship.

Besides this have long switched to a harem format, complaining about it at this stage is kinda odd isnt it?

The oft-misused word "harem" is defined as a group of female sexual partners of one man. Lots of people use it to describe a group of women orbiting around a single guy despite having only--at worst--the most tenuous of romantic links to him (i.e., a crush). That's what you have here in this manga: four girls with a crush on a guy in a relationship, and at least two of them explicitly know; all four have some idea that he's already taken. So no, this is not a "harem" despite how frequently that word is misused.

What is true, however, is that only one of those girls has her name in the title. Whomever was here only to see Mone was surely here from the start, because the story was about Mone herself, Nobuyasu, and the former's strange approach to love--the narrative rot aside. You may use the word "harem" to imply a substantial connection between Nobuyasu and those four mobs, but that's just your implication (and, if the actions of your kind (your opinion and behavior are not unique) are any indication, wishful thinking); there's no connection between him and those mobs that justifies the level of attention they're getting when the story had a direction. The only connection present in the story that actually and on its face deserves that sort of attention is that between Nobuyasu and Mone--quite obviously, once again, because her name is in the title.

So you can't see why others think you can have a story with just one couple, right? One in which one relationship remains the focus, no matter who's around; a relationship that is the only one that's nurtured and maintained by the author--and isn't just a quickly settled matter that's left behind for others once it is. Beyond you, right? If so, then Dakara Boku wa, H ga Dekinai had one relationship maintained, despite the circumstances--why was that able to work? CubexCursedxCurious did the same thing (the LN was even more egregious in its preservation of that relationship)--how was that able to happen? Kore ha Zombie desu ka had only one real relationship in its story, with the other girl's romance with the MC being negated and relegated to one-sided by its circumstances--how could that have come to pass? Take your pick of any of the Shanaclone anime--any at all; there's no secret who comes out on top with their respective MCs and, by your logic, none of them should have been possible. After all, romance was a major element throughout all of these series: most of these were not strictly romantic comedies (which, by the way, should not be possible by your logic either), but the amount of attention paid to romance in them should have resulted in the same "veering" into "melodrama" you spoke of; a lot of them had relationships that were less stable than that of Nobuyasu and Mone, after all.

None of them, however, had to relegate their female leads to side character status the way you imply it's necessary for this manga.

So how, exactly, would this story "veer" as you say? Why would that be as unavoidable for this manga in particular as you say? Is it because you think there's no other direction for such a story to go in? Even though the two MCs are shown to immutably love each other--even to this latest of chapters, despite all the conflict created by outsiders? The story doesn't just have the romance between the two leads, but Mone-san's overly serious approach to dating. Obviously--that's the title: the title of the romantic comedy that this manga is.

You may or may not like the mobs far more than Mone (a recurring sentiment among those who criticize any critics of the mangaka's focus on the four mobs), but the plainly observable reality of this manga is that it has had its focus jerked in a direction completely different from what it originally was planned to be--and not for the better. It's not better for the people who like those four mobs, because those four aren't going to win. It's not better for the people who saw Mone-san and picked the story up for her, because the story's been bastardized for the sake of people who like girls like those four sociopathic/psychopathic mobs.
 

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