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A shameless lack of self-awareness. Like I said, why else would Dark Mangirl chop her hair and show up in front of a a guy who rejected her other than to be an attention whore?
That said, it's funny that Shorthair (I guess she's not the only one now, huh?) called Daisy an "outsider" when she fits the story better than all four of the Mob Squad together. On top of that, and just like Yuyami, she also manages to be more interestingly included (for what little there is about her) than the four narrative tumors put together: the author slipped this revelation into the story in a way that creates impact but maintains narrative harmony, as opposed to how he forced the four mobs into the story for only one role--one which ensured they had no place in the story and would only serve to disrupt it, since that role included forcing Mone out of focus.
That said, it's funny that Shorthair (I guess she's not the only one now, huh?) called Daisy an "outsider" when she fits the story better than all four of the Mob Squad together. On top of that, and just like Yuyami, she also manages to be more interestingly included (for what little there is about her) than the four narrative tumors put together: the author slipped this revelation into the story in a way that creates impact but maintains narrative harmony, as opposed to how he forced the four mobs into the story for only one role--one which ensured they had no place in the story and would only serve to disrupt it, since that role included forcing Mone out of focus.
