Dex-chan lover
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I'm not sure if I like Winfield's inclusion in the plot or not. She feels like a plot device used to move things along, taking care of scheming/plotting/reasoning entirely off-panel, so that the author doesn't actually have to spend more time on it. I guess it lets the author focus the story on what he really wants to (dark elf sex), but when the story is about Second's journey to the top, it feels a bit "off" to have the necessary plotting for that just pushed to the side like this.