Moto Yuusha wa Shizuka ni Kurashitai - Vol. 2 Ch. 18 - The Hero Says Goodbye To The Saintess

[asherdales]

Writing 101: How Not To Write

 

[VividlyLucid29]

WTF is happening?!

 

[mulate]

Ok, now this is the shittiest AND most unsatisfying story I've read this year.

The main plot is literally offscreened for the fucking village of like...5 people I dont even care about. What even is this? I dont even give a shit about the protag because of how milquetoast he is about...everything. Even his fucking village.

 

[VanillaEnjoyer]

Really want to tell people off here, but I lack the motivation for it...

Oh, well! Back to the adorable village life.