Page 12: "If your looking to open the lock". If his what?
And as for the chapter, with her metods I can't see how her traiding cart isn't drenched in blood like hell.
Also, I am a bit bored of "pilot" first chapters that demonstrate super strong enemy that is dealt with in one swipe just to introduce main characters and the world itself, but won't be any more relevant then pebble on the roadside afterwards. I guess it's inevitable for the genre/subgenre.