Move On - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[Mick96]

Sad

 

[ckckckck]

@ZodiacWitch Am I right in presuming you are the author of this work?

If yes, I liked the work and perfectly agree with your afterword.
The non-verbal story telling was a refreshing and well done way. I just didn't fully understand why the Hunter attacked the witch a second time after stopping the first time. Is his family threatened or is this simply the only job he can do to support them?

 

[ZodiacWitch]

@ckckckck hey thank you for your comment!

I'm so happy to see someone paying attention to my work ; -;
The witch hunter stopped attacking for the first time because he saw kids around. and shooting someone in the head in front of children is not something he would want to do. that reflect his character flaw as a hunter/sniper (in short, he's emotional).
I do realize at the end that it is really hard to tell the complete story without a single word... but I tried at least

 

[ckckckck]

@ZodiacWitch Oh definietely. I always find it interesting when someone breaks out of the standard mold and tries something different. And the ambiguity of non-verbal storytelling is part of the charm for me. The story was conveyed, but the reasoning of the characters (for each reader) is depending on the mind of the reader as much as of the creator.

I'm looking forward to read more of your stories!

 

[ZodiacWitch]

@ckckckck thank you so much ^^

well I'm working on a different tittle called ''Witch Sanctuary'' that I've started last year. The start is kind of underwhelming and messy but I think I'm getting better with each chapters...