Muchi na Ojou-sama o Suki Houdai Suru Hon - Oneshot

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Sloppy Seconds, brought to you by head empty
Translation: scav
Editing: Nick "Zorb" Cage
Editing QC: crimsonraes
Raws: VoiceLuck

This one suffered from a rewrite so egregious that it had to be fixed (note: all rewrites are egregious enough to need fixing). It was an extra shame thanks to the art being quite good, and the girl being wonderfully plump.

Alice talks like a stuck-up brat (think Satoko from Higurashi) so I tried to avoid contractions as much as possible and include some "smarter" words she might use in order to try and give her a distinct speaking style. I hope it gets across to you.
 

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