Dex-chan lover
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People who read the novel: do the books do a better job of explaining why she is jumping from point to point?
She’s clearly looking for an escape, or to be rescued. Valid! But she herself states that she’s going in circles. That she keeps ending up in the “safe” zone, and then from there, the Monster Den (I’m getting Mystery Dungeon PTSD here).
It just doesn’t seem like a sound strategy. She mentions she can gather food and water with mana, and can rest to recover said mana. But also she’s slowly… not recovering?
Basically, it reads like she’s running in a loop, slowly losing her stamina. But I don’t know why she’s losing her stamina when she can rest, drink, and eat, and I don’t know why she’s running in a loop when she knows it’s a loop.
She’s clearly looking for an escape, or to be rescued. Valid! But she herself states that she’s going in circles. That she keeps ending up in the “safe” zone, and then from there, the Monster Den (I’m getting Mystery Dungeon PTSD here).
It just doesn’t seem like a sound strategy. She mentions she can gather food and water with mana, and can rest to recover said mana. But also she’s slowly… not recovering?
Basically, it reads like she’s running in a loop, slowly losing her stamina. But I don’t know why she’s losing her stamina when she can rest, drink, and eat, and I don’t know why she’s running in a loop when she knows it’s a loop.