My Brother's Girlfriend - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[MadaDameyo]

Toxic af
I love it

 

[Kirin-kun]

I wonder what was the point of this release, except localizing it more and using more vulgar language than me. ("who pissed in your cereals" really?). And some meaning is lost in this translation. Like how she's two years younger. Or that her bro treats her like air. Or hints about their age, since the gf has entrance exams (3rd year). All things that were lost here.

Besides the different language used here, I don't see the point of this, especially since it's the first one of this group. But more power to you I guess.

Nice work on the SFXs though. Better than mine.

 

[feha]

the dialog does not match up with the story?

 

[REDRED]

Hm? Huh? HUUUHH???







nice though😏👌

 

[Donirexian]

the staff picture just reminded me of this funny Pokémon meme

 

[Samuringa]

I wonder what was the point of this release, except localizing it more and using more vulgar language than me. ("who pissed in your cereals" really?). And some meaning is lost in this translation. Like how she's two years younger. Or that her bro treats her like air. Or hints about their age, since the gf has entrance exams (3rd year). All things that were lost here.

Besides the different language used here, I don't see the point of this, especially since it's the first one of this group. But more power to you I guess.

Nice work on the SFXs though. Better than mine.

Your dialogue is stilted and unnatural (Using "Konbini" and "Brocon" instead of actually translating what the words mean, "What's so great about this snake of a woman" is a sentence no one would ever say, pointing out honorifics instead of adapting the dialogue)

Despite the details this translation might miss, its the one I choose to share with people since it sounds like how real people would talk.