My Dearest Nemesis - Ch. 24 - Transfer?

[MangaDex]

 

[Enelreturns]

I'll be going camping for the weekend so I won't have my PC, I'll try to get another one out before I have to leave tomorrow!

 

[CamTheCamel]

Here before it goes down in the comments yet again 💀💀💀

 

[AbigaiI]

Generally you match whatever the original formatting was as closely as possible.

 

[Brhannada]

Re: text in speech bubbles. Please don't try to fill all the space as that can sometimes negatively impact readability. Text in bubbles need "breathing space". You can check out official translations on MangaPlus and stuff of popular series (usually first 3 chapters are free) to get a sense for what I mean.

 

[yeatle]

The improvement in quality from chp 20 is crazy, good work, keep doin ur thing man. Id like to see what you work on in the future

 

[FlyingBarbet]

Thank you for your work.

 

[Yuri_Enjoyer_Deluxe]

Cant lie, this is a marked improvement, gotta give my props at this point.

Good god those words are tearing her from the inside out... she gotta lock in real soon or the tiger will escape from the cage...

 

[Yuri_Enjoyer_Deluxe]

Here before it goes down in the comments yet again 💀💀💀

All the things that couldve been said, have been, I wouldnt worry too much.

Not unless someone wants to force the issue at this stage.

 

[Enelreturns]

Re: text in speech bubbles. Please don't try to fill all the space as that can sometimes negatively impact readability. Text in bubbles need "breathing space". You can check out official translations on MangaPlus and stuff of popular series (usually first 3 chapters are free) to get a sense for what I mean.

Okay yeah that makes sense, thank you!

 

[Irene-stan]

The quality got a big upgrade yet again! Thanks for putting in the effort to improve despite all the push back. Regarding the font size, whenever you make it big to fill the bubbles, my instinct is to always assume the words are being yelled, so I guess you could maybe occasionally use it that way? Seeing it constantly feels very harsh, though.

I feel a little bad for the bad dog Jiang Xue, she doesn't even know how she feels herself, let alone Shen. I'm rooting on her, she'll figure it out. Surely.

 

[Cheezejoewater]

Here before it goes down in the comments yet again 💀💀💀

Real 💀

 

[Surch]

[...] my instinct is to always assume the words are being yelled, so I guess you could maybe occasionally use it that way? Seeing it constantly feels very harsh, though.

that and also for impact when it's something that catches a character off-guard maybe? seen that a few times.

from someone who is also on the spectrum: nice going, you look like you're improving quick. here's hoping you keep it up.

 

[vicentetlg]

Finally! we get more than 1 chapter a month.
Btw, as many have said, don't feel the bubble lol
Thank you for the chapters.

 

[Enelreturns]

Finally! we get more than 1 chapter a month.
Btw, as many have said, don't feel the bubble lol
Thank you for the chapters.

Yup! Definitely will not do that anymore, thank you to everyone who pointed it out to me! I really appreciate the feedback 😊

 

[danny597]

Love that the other lady so quickly seemed to grasp the situation and decided to give a generous shove to jiang

 

[SrNevik]

Love that the other lady so quickly seemed to grasp the situation and decided to give a generous shove to jiang

She thought, "oh it's gremlin time? Let me meddle a bit."

 

[nyannibalism]

thanks for the translation!

jiang is fighting for her life trying to figure out how to get out of the hole she accidentally dug herself with shen by just not understanding why she would see something like that as important, i feel so bad for her but damn if that isnt a relatable autistic experience

 

[Grellow]

Okay yeah that makes sense, thank you!

Also you should try varying the font you use depending on the tone the character should speak in, it's those QOL features that make up a good scan.

(Which also reminds me you don't add white outline to text when it's not on a white background so it's hard to read)

 

[Enelreturns]

Also you should try varying the font you use depending on the tone the character should speak in, it's those QOL features that make up a good scan.

(Which also reminds me you don't add white outline to text when it's not on a white background so it's hard to read)

Do you mean like, I should have a white text box?