My Death Flags Show No Sign of Ending

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These adaptations really need to do more showing and not telling or just drop the crazy amount of exposition and turn it into a power point presentation with bullet pointed lists. These past few chapters have been nothing but exposition dumps and flashbacks.

It’s not even anything new, I think in the past 3-6 chapters the same flashback to the cell has been referenced multiple times with basically the exact same scene. Also the sword, bro we KNOW every time he uses the sword bad things happen it doesn’t need a flashback. Or a whole page of monologuing.

At least with this latest chapter we see the story progress if even a little.

I thought this was good enough for a 6, but ever since Harold was arrested this has just been a slog. Back down to 5. Does this mango even get edited? I’m kinda curious cause if it does they should quit being an editor.
 
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The story is good. Though the manga doesn't transition the time skips properly. Especially the first time skip. And chapter 23.5 is supposed to be 24.5
 
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It's so silly. I can already tell this will end with MC sacrificing himself. He sees invisible flags and constantly does things to make it worse. What a total beta maso mc.
 
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It's so silly. I can already tell this will end with MC sacrificing himself. He sees invisible flags and constantly does things to make it worse. What a total beta maso mc.
He's not a masochist. His a person with kindness. To him, seeing other people suffer is more painful than enduring suffering himself. Which is why he's trying to help them despite knowing that he will suffer because of it. But I guess some people take kindness for weakness. Which is why this world is so f@cked up.
 
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The summary for this story is:
*Harold pulls a 120 IQ move out

Everyone: OMG ITS A MASTERFUL PLAY HES OVER 9000 IQ OH MY GOD HES THE GENIUS OF THE CENTRY OH LORD ITS ALL PART OF HIS MASTERPLAN EVEN THE VENDING MACHINE REVOLUTION OF 3087 WAS ORCHESTRATED BY HIM ITS ALL PART OF HIS ACT HES SUCH A SELF SACRIFICING PERSON OH MY GOD


Harold: *none the wiser “All according to my master plan, nobody knows that I’m doing good things! Mwahahah!!!”
 
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It's so silly. I can already tell this will end with MC sacrificing himself. He sees invisible flags and constantly does things to make it worse. What a total beta maso mc.
I’m starting to think he should die in the end, he is stupid, had a lot of ways to get out of the history but always decided for a way that will make him stand out… hell he should kill do scientist and run away after the judgment !
 
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I definitely think this is the best one among the " reincarnated in a video game " genre
 

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