My Disciples Are Super Gods - Ch. 1

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thank you for the translation guys! Im gonna point out a few things i noticed :) On page 3 he used two instead of too. They were too weak, Not two like the number. On page 4 they said "who will accept you as there patriarch" it should be their instead of there. On page 5 the wrong your is used. you're is you are. On page 16 it looks like theres a few panels missing. On page 17 inherit is spelled wrong. Page 20 fairies is spelled wrong. Page 23 also has panels missing. Same as page 23, Page is cut off. Page 26 should be "get out of here" instead of "get out here". Page 31 said is misspelled.
 
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actually there no missing pages i'm just using ibis paint to clean and typeset and just forget to crop out the extra size and thanks for pointing out my mistakes and i'll try to improve my translation and i'm just using google translate that's why it's not that accurate
 

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