@sixonepm - Here are some corrections
pg - page
p - panel
b - box or bubble
if I omit the pg that means its the same page as the last edit
pg2p1b2 Maybe she is shy?
p3b1 It would be a waste to eat it all at once...
pg3p2b1 Maybe she lied about the chocolate being from Inukai-san...
pg6p1b1 It's been a while since I've been to school...
pg8p5b1 Ch-changing!?
pg9p1b1 Don't look at them!
p3b1 "It's Inukai-sans tights..." or "It's Inukai-sans stockings..."
pg13p1b2 Does Inukai-san always eat alone?
pg17p4b1 Anyone have any other ideas?
p5b2 I'll never get out of the bag at this rate...
pg15p2b1 The girl in the coat!!?
pg16p1b1 Inukai-san will reflexively raise her hand!
p5b4 They found me!!
pg17p3b2 How do I get past this barrier?!
also the last page should be easy enough to clean but I cant suggest how to since I don't know what tools you have access to, but in photoshop that would be easy with just the brush or spot healing brush
On a side note it would appear Unukai understands him by the way she responds to his thoughts