From the summary this sounds like a basic level generic story following a recently more popular trope (trend?), and I really can’t defend it. But beyond that it only has a PART OF THE FIRST CHAPTER. How does this already have such a low rating?! I’m not exactly expecting much from the story (hell, I’m gonna save myself the trouble and skip reading it all together), but I’m also not about to give something that even if I read what’s available I still haven’t scratched the surface of the story, ANY RATING (be it a 1 or 10). Looking at this, it’d be much nicer if you could only rate each chapter (at the end of the chapter) and then the site created an overall rating based off of each individual chapter’s rating. Some people would probably still review bomb it, but at least they would have to look at all the pages first and then the readers that stuck around for more chapters (and liked them) could raise the overall rating.