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@NaniTheFuck
Lmao dude I didn't bother rating this piece of shit. Its not bias that would make me call it a 1 or 4. Its purely facts. You aren't providing any reasons as to why this manga is even halfway decent. The premise is boring and uninspired. There are hundreds of manga with the exact same story. Nothing original here. Okay then lets go on with the execution. First off the dude literally listens to his girl get dicked down and he neither leaves nor confronts them about it. He just goes along with them. Then he's shocked after getting betrayed. Then suddenly the allies just start becoming bots and start talking about some kind of sacrifice BS plot mechanic to justify killing the dude off. Its lazy writing. The author basically says, the people the MC was traveling with this whole time were actually bad guys but he somehow never noticed all this time. Its just incredibly braindead and lazy to have the characters all just instantly change from "good guys" to murderous torturers. It would be one thing if they just had the hero and the girl betray him and come of with an excuse to the rest of the party, because at least that would make them seem less like 1 dimensional villains and more like human beings. The characters thus far haven't showed any actual human traits. Its like a robot wrote this. No emotion is conveyed, its just bad guys are bad because bad guys are bad. Its dumb as fuck and boring as fuck. Honestly 1 dimensional villains can be tolerated in some cases, if the MC/Side characters have a vibrant enough personality to spark up the story. Nope, just generic MC being a "bad guy" saving his next waifu from peril because plot. The dialouge in this manga is akin to that of Oblivion. At least Oblivion is so bad its funny, while this is just suffering incarnate.
Bruh that is what I'm saying. A fuck ton of the isekai, reincarnation, revenege, 0 to hero, etc. are shit. And I'm not "trying" to act like I have experience with NTR. My favorite hentai are fucking Kedamono-tachi no Sumu Ie de and Ore ga Kanojo o su Wake. I fuck with NTR, just not with shit like this. The NTR isn't what makes me dislike this. Its just the same common trope of, hero is good guy but gets fucked over because ... plot, so then the hero has to become the ultimate "bad guy" to get his revenge. Its so boring and uninspired. The Revenge genre is so watered down at this point. Its just that some guy with OP powers beats the bad guys and girls down and then rapes and murders them. Like dude this is not good story telling. So if you aren't trying to tell a good story, just make it a fucking hentai. Don't give it some bullshit story, just make rape doujins. Idk why you keep acting like I'm saying the NTR is big problem with this. I don't give a fuck that the dude got cucked. I do care that the story is lazily written and that both the protagonist and antagonists are 1 dimensional troglodytes with no higher level of thinking. The whole story is predictable. The next few chapters will be the dude getting revenge for the girl, her swearing her loyalty/love for him, and then he will proceed to either take revenge on one of the heroes or getting the next waifu, who will probably be a beast/monster girl. I'd bet my money on the monster girl. Nothing interesting or novel is going to happen. You said the story is not so bad, but it really is poorly planned and poorly executed. I don't mind reading some rape revenge scenes, so I might pop in and out of this series to check if the author can at least make those interesting. Besides that I really don't have an interest in this shit show.
And just so you know, you can like something even if it is objectively bad. There is no shame in it. I enjoy my fair share of trash manga too, I'm still reading Redo Of A Healer despite the fact that it is incredibly bad. Read what you want, no one can stop you my guy.
Lmao dude I didn't bother rating this piece of shit. Its not bias that would make me call it a 1 or 4. Its purely facts. You aren't providing any reasons as to why this manga is even halfway decent. The premise is boring and uninspired. There are hundreds of manga with the exact same story. Nothing original here. Okay then lets go on with the execution. First off the dude literally listens to his girl get dicked down and he neither leaves nor confronts them about it. He just goes along with them. Then he's shocked after getting betrayed. Then suddenly the allies just start becoming bots and start talking about some kind of sacrifice BS plot mechanic to justify killing the dude off. Its lazy writing. The author basically says, the people the MC was traveling with this whole time were actually bad guys but he somehow never noticed all this time. Its just incredibly braindead and lazy to have the characters all just instantly change from "good guys" to murderous torturers. It would be one thing if they just had the hero and the girl betray him and come of with an excuse to the rest of the party, because at least that would make them seem less like 1 dimensional villains and more like human beings. The characters thus far haven't showed any actual human traits. Its like a robot wrote this. No emotion is conveyed, its just bad guys are bad because bad guys are bad. Its dumb as fuck and boring as fuck. Honestly 1 dimensional villains can be tolerated in some cases, if the MC/Side characters have a vibrant enough personality to spark up the story. Nope, just generic MC being a "bad guy" saving his next waifu from peril because plot. The dialouge in this manga is akin to that of Oblivion. At least Oblivion is so bad its funny, while this is just suffering incarnate.
if it were to follow what you said, then the Other Genre like Isekai, Reincarnation, Revenge, etc. on Japanese Manga.. will also be bad too.
because majority of it was plain and cringe and trend dogshit too right?
Bruh that is what I'm saying. A fuck ton of the isekai, reincarnation, revenege, 0 to hero, etc. are shit. And I'm not "trying" to act like I have experience with NTR. My favorite hentai are fucking Kedamono-tachi no Sumu Ie de and Ore ga Kanojo o su Wake. I fuck with NTR, just not with shit like this. The NTR isn't what makes me dislike this. Its just the same common trope of, hero is good guy but gets fucked over because ... plot, so then the hero has to become the ultimate "bad guy" to get his revenge. Its so boring and uninspired. The Revenge genre is so watered down at this point. Its just that some guy with OP powers beats the bad guys and girls down and then rapes and murders them. Like dude this is not good story telling. So if you aren't trying to tell a good story, just make it a fucking hentai. Don't give it some bullshit story, just make rape doujins. Idk why you keep acting like I'm saying the NTR is big problem with this. I don't give a fuck that the dude got cucked. I do care that the story is lazily written and that both the protagonist and antagonists are 1 dimensional troglodytes with no higher level of thinking. The whole story is predictable. The next few chapters will be the dude getting revenge for the girl, her swearing her loyalty/love for him, and then he will proceed to either take revenge on one of the heroes or getting the next waifu, who will probably be a beast/monster girl. I'd bet my money on the monster girl. Nothing interesting or novel is going to happen. You said the story is not so bad, but it really is poorly planned and poorly executed. I don't mind reading some rape revenge scenes, so I might pop in and out of this series to check if the author can at least make those interesting. Besides that I really don't have an interest in this shit show.
And just so you know, you can like something even if it is objectively bad. There is no shame in it. I enjoy my fair share of trash manga too, I'm still reading Redo Of A Healer despite the fact that it is incredibly bad. Read what you want, no one can stop you my guy.