My Rival Is Behind You - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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It already has... Seems it's a one-trick pony: boy meets up with his crush; boy gets scared by ghost; crush thinks it's her fault; boy is too much of a wimp to tell crush the truth so he runs away instead. That's the formula, but in how many situations can it produce an interesting and entertaining chaprter? So far: none.
 
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Already annoyed by ghost being an ass. This better have some actual plot sooner or later.
 
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Isn't this boi too weak? People are only scared of ghosts when they don't know if ghosts exist or not.
 

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