My Rival Is Behind You - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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Frankly, I'm glad it's over with just 3 chapters. I don't think I could stomach any more of this cringe-worthy crap. The MC is one of the most pathetic excuses of a man in any series I've read, and he thinks he's in a love triangle, competing for a girl with a rival that's also a girl? The scenario got old very quickly (with the second chapter), and I couldn't even bother to read most of the third chapter as it was obvious that it was more of the same. Why did I even read this to begin with??? A rating of "1" just isn't low enough.
 
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Cute ending, though I wish there was at least some backstory.
 
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Their Bizarre Love Triangle Continues...

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That ghost is literally just cucking him for no reason and wants someone who can't even see them
 
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Thank you for the chapter, I thought it was a decent series a shame that it was so short. In the end they were able to develop respect for each other. They were able to understand that despite how much they consider themselves competitors for Shiori they both hold her well being as a priority. I thought the kicker at the end would be that as Shiori started to the fall the ghost would reach her first only to realize that she's intangible and thus can't catch her leaving it up to the rival with a pulse to have to save her, the non-rizzler getting to her first and then overshooting Shiori as she manages to regain her balance only to be saved by the ghost that evidently can make physical contact was a nice compromise. It showed Shiori can take care of herself and her two suitors coming to the realization that in that situation despite their intentions and feelings for her both would have fallen short if she was in peril.
 
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So it's end on the status quo hum.
But let's be real here, the dude has all the chances to end with her senpai. He's literally competing (if we can call it a competition) with a ghost. A ghost, her senpai can't see, hear and feel it. Literally, she has zero chance.
It's not a love triangle.

The only person the ghost can communicate with is the dude, and it's not even trying to convey her love to the senpai. It's a one dude, two girls stories.

"But it's for the lols" yeah yeah, but it's not that funny for a rom-com.
At least it only length 3 chapters.
 
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