Thanks for the update. You might want to get a proofreader while the english is understandable it becomes confusing from time to time. For example, there is a bubble where the FL says "I can't beleive his advice worked..." while on the following seen the ones who gave the advice are the three grannies. There are many dialogs like this which can be improved by having a native english speaker poofread it to improve the quality of the translation.