My Senpai is Annoying - Ch. 233

Group Leader
Joined
Jan 18, 2018
Messages
1,016
No thanks. Maybe you're the one who should consume product plebian since it seems that even tho I'm being an idiot, you are getting dumber everytime you reply to me because you can't understand what I'm saying
Why should I expend effort on an idiot? Go fuck yourself.
 
Joined
Mar 4, 2024
Messages
4
I think him saying "I introduce my fiance" isn't him proposing off screen, it's him saying "I love her, she's going to be my wife.'
I'd say this is a good step seeing as how she wants to change herself up and doesn't want to rely on him etc. However, with how close this is cutting to the end of this....ehh?
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
May 11, 2019
Messages
735
So…no proposal scene involving can of Oshiruko? Phooey.
 
Contributor
Joined
Mar 14, 2018
Messages
748
This writing is so bad it's good.

What fucking wife, dude? Are you delulu? You didn't even hold hands properly.
I can't, if two years ago, no, even a year ago you told me this work will have such a disappointing ending I wouldn't believe it one bit and wouldn't spit in your face instead. Now look who's laughing.

This work is so ahh

Alternative interpretation:
He had a wife all this time.
 
Contributor
Joined
Mar 14, 2018
Messages
748
I think I cracked the Da Bananinci Code.

1. We get bread crumbed, then we spend a few chapters exploring the same situation from different perspectives. Extra points if a non related chapter is sandwiched in between.

[...]
My friend, you've just described classic poor writing.
But I still have to say, considering we had weak, lukewarm, but okayish writing in most of this story until the end parts, the author actually had to try to write the ending so poorly.
Dude's insane. Maybe he died and some imposter finishes up? Nah, any other person would've tried making sensible stuff.
 
Contributor
Joined
Mar 14, 2018
Messages
748
Also I want to point out that the "author's fanbox NSFW posts" is insanely overblown, he literally posts cropped contextless semi-erotic nudity-less (think no nipples, barbie-like bodies, no genitalia) poorly made arts of his characters.
I wondered what people meant by the fanbox stuff possibly being inchapter stories, but holy shit this is peak copium.

It's not even proper NSFW too. In fact I found a single (one) artwork that has genitalia in all of his art and it's a character from Splatoon LMFAO.
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top