My Wife Who Has Been Told She Doesn’t Have Long to Live... - Ch. 4 - My Wife, Who Has Been Told She Doesn't Have Long to Live, Wanted to Leave One La…

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This is cute and all, but it feels like it's lacking oomph. None of the jokes are particularly funny, there's no particular drama, it just comes across as slice-of-life moments contrasted to when she was sick - and those sick moments would have been more dramatic if she actually looked more... well, sick (the only difference in her design is that she looks sad and she's wearing a robe).
At least it was a brief little romp

Could be better outta ten.
 
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not many stories make me feel this way its nice to find another even if it is short it was good
 

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