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DjAlexDubCheck Group Leader Joined Feb 1, 2018 Messages 2,542 Jul 14, 2018 #2 This is not bad at all, deserves more views
Drifter Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 22, 2018 Messages 2,344 Jul 16, 2018 #3 Give it a few chapters. The characters look like walking tropes at first but get better.
C coyote_vdb Supporter Joined Feb 24, 2023 Messages 1,197 Dec 9, 2023 #5 Problem is that the writer is chasing so many targets that everything falls apart and end up not making sense at all.
Problem is that the writer is chasing so many targets that everything falls apart and end up not making sense at all.