Naka ga Warusugiru Osananajimi ga, Ore ga 5 Nen Ijou Hamatteiru FPS Game no Friend Datta Ken ni Tsuite. - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Childhood friends who are on…

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It's nice to see a revival of a manga. Also keep going dude you'll get good in translating.

plus idk why the author changed the art style
 
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Huh, did the artist change to the one from the hypnosis sister one?
I prefer the chapter 1 art :nyoron: .
I like how the HypnoSis artist drew the Kriss Vector, but the way he draws people, especially females, can be very hit or miss...
 
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I like how the HypnoSis artist drew the Kriss Vector, but the way he draws people, especially females, can be very hit or miss...
It's the teeth that keep throwing me off, it's all good until somebody opens their mouth.

Also please take up the offer of a proofreader lol, the English here was readable but very rough.
 
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That poor gun.... that didn't need to be bolted..... remember not to shoot people with bb's or airsoft without proper equipment, it can still cause injuries..... and alot of pain
 
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God, the art going from the promo chapter to this is... shocking. This chapter's art is so amateurish I'm shocked it made it through the pipeline. Their teeth. They look like fuckin Jaws from Moonraker. Omg ew
 

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