Namae no nai Kaibutsu - Kumo to Shoujo to Ryoki Satsujin - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.3

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Oh god, if your story is revolved around spider at least research how spider looks.. that spider looks more like a tick than a spider...
 
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@St-George the thing is, iirc the legs are not connected to the abdomen part but on the other part, (can’t remember what that is called).
While the spider in here looks like she has her legs connected to the abdomen
 
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I'm interested in seeing the romance aspect of this story? lol
 
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Not sure I like the spider now that it was just "borrowing" the important parts.Maybe she wished to be a spider and met this one.
 

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