NARUTO Reborn! (Doujinshi)

[MangaDex]

 

[barel-07]

actually i have always imagined about it exited

 

[mikenogen]

Yeah I know the art kinda sucks and so many recycled panel, BUT DAMN I'm really interested on how this story will go. There's so many DBZ what if, now we need more Naruto what if.

Keep up the work! I will really appreciate this more if the author use their own art rather than using old panels.

 

[MolaCola]

bad original art
lots of reused LQ panels
Naruto gets a free Kurama
and as nice as it is that Rock Lee and Guy seem relevant again
in the end Naruto's training will always put him beneath Lee, afterall he's doing less than Lee and Lee's been doing what he's been doing for however many years at this point.
-afterall the reason why characters like Lee became irrelevant is b/c before the might of the Uzumaki Clans Chakra Pool, Sage Mode, The power of the Tailed Beasts, the Rinnegan and its derivatives, hard work in Naruto worthless
-I did find something strange cuz i felt Naruto had to do something a lil special to acquire Sage Mode, related to where he trained. yeah its crazy to let him have Sage Mode here, since he was using toad oil to absorb Nature's energy
//so plot convenience in more ways than one

 

[EYOR]

Lowkey it hits, good shii fr

 

[Arutja]

the art is really so-so, still the story so far is more appealing to me than most fanfictions/fannovels.

 

[skankhunt129]

Its petty good story wise but im disappointed that im not seeing the artist get bettet as the story gose on. When i saw the rough art in chapter 1 i was excited to read a good what if story where i get to see the artist develop as it gose on, seeing recycled panels is disappointing but their almost all perfect choises that match the text and seen very well.

as of chapter 9

8.5/10 story
4/10 hand drawn art(would be higher if it was in every chapter getting better even if minimally)
7/10 choice of pannel
8.5/10 consistency to all original characterization

 

[yabasu]

this manga is very interesting! but, Hiatus due to copyright issues

 

[Kisekifan]

Sakura, Ever the burden and literally the weakest member of the three right now. Yet she thinks she's stronger than Naruto while Naruto both OTL and this version are stronger than her even without Kurama.

 

[huttingham]

Its petty good story wise but im disappointed that im not seeing the artist get bettet as the story gose on. When i saw the rough art in chapter 1 i was excited to read a good what if story where i get to see the artist develop as it gose on, seeing recycled panels is disappointing but their almost all perfect choises that match the text and seen very well.

as of chapter 9

8.5/10 story
4/10 hand drawn art(would be higher if it was in every chapter getting better even if minimally)
7/10 choice of pannel
8.5/10 consistency to all original characterization

art quality tends to take longer than the course of 9 chapters to notably increase lol. heck, take one piece and tokyo ghoul. both of those took dozens of chapters for the art to get iconic and those guys had an industry backing them. i get you tho

will point out that the panel layout does seem to be getting better at a good rate though. it's starting to look like an actual manga as opposed to a golden age comic

 

[huttingham]

a bit amatuer in presentation but serviceable. A lot more enjoyable than i expected.

 

[skankhunt129]

art quality tends to take longer than the course of 9 chapters to notably increase lol. heck, take one piece and tokyo ghoul. both of those took dozens of chapters for the art to get iconic and those guys had an industry backing them. i get you tho

will point out that the panel layout does seem to be getting better at a good rate though. it's starting to look like an actual manga as opposed to a golden age comic

I agree would take awhile to get better. I was thinking more than 100 chapters later it would be nice to look back on the art.

Edit: cool profile picture, what series is it from?

 

[huttingham]

I agree would take awhile to get better. I was thinking more than 100 chapters later it would be nice to look back on the art.

Edit: cool profile picture, what series is it from?

Battle Through the Heavens iirc

 

[Lelouch99]

This story reads like a Naruto fan who read the "When I got Reincarnated as Yamacha" doujin and wanted to copy it, but forgot to put a good story and art along while mangling characterization for the protagonist.

 

[Darkgon]

Holy fuck this is garbage. I want to be nice but the guys making this don't seem to have the slightest clue how people talk, act, or are even driven in the slightest.

 

[PaaLuuY]

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