Natori to Shizuha - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Once Again

[MangaDex]

 

[eightrooks]

To the other translator; you asked, so... here you go. You don't want it, let me know, and I'll take it down again.

If you want to keep going, feel free. I'm not viewing this as "taking over" or anything. I have 1 through 7 done, though. (I've had them for months, I didn't just produce this out of thin air. <_< )

Also on the one hand I corrected a couple of minor things in mine based on yours, so thank you. On the other hand, at the time I'm posting this you're missing a page.

 

[camelith]

I think asking another group to pick it up to provide a "better quality translation" precludes MTL.

 

[toritotori]

To the other translator; you asked, so... here you go. You don't want it, let me know, and I'll take it down again.

If you want to keep going, feel free. I'm not viewing this as "taking over" or anything. I have 1 through 7 done, though. (I've had them for months, I didn't just produce this out of thin air. <_< )

Also on the one hand I corrected a couple of minor things in mine based on yours, so thank you. On the other hand, at the time I'm posting this you're missing a page.

Not at all! I'm glad we both love this work

I'll keep working on my version. Due to personal bandwidth, it'll probably take weeks or even months, so readers will have quite a wait on my end. Please feel free to release the rest of yours, and thanks for checking with me

also, your redrawing work is seriously impressive, especially all the SFX and the bottom-right panel on page 77

thanks for pointing out the missing page; I accidentally left it out while fixing some typos earlier today

 

[eightrooks]

also, your redrawing work is seriously impressive, especially all the SFX and the bottom-right panel on page 77

Thank you, I appreciate that. (A lot of it wouldn't look that great if I moved the text though... <_< ) You're plainly not so bad at it either.

NtS is at least relatively easy as far as this stuff goes... lots of clean linework, simple shading and flat gradients. So far there's only one panel in #7 where I could not match the tones properly for the life of me, so I had to leave it as kind of a messy grey splat under the text. Still, I've got #1 of Aomori to Hototogisu still incomplete on my hard drive because of the insane amount of redrawing it requires, so compared to something like that this isn't too much of a hurdle. (I spent twenty, thirty hours redoing AtH's splash page alone - I do not use generative fill or anything like that - and nobody's seen it apart from a few people on Discord. >_> )

 

[boss3334]

saw this on twt