Natsume to Natsume - Vol. 4 Ch. 23.2
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This manga irrationally pisses me off.
It has so much potential: the premise is great, characters are fantastic, the art is beautiful. However, the scene writing and overall flow of the story is an absolute disaster. It's so incoherent, so all over the place. It's like the author has ADHD. Makes it so difficult to care for anything happening when it such a mass.
It's a shame, because it has so many right pieces for an excellent manga, but the core is just not there.
It has so much potential: the premise is great, characters are fantastic, the art is beautiful. However, the scene writing and overall flow of the story is an absolute disaster. It's so incoherent, so all over the place. It's like the author has ADHD. Makes it so difficult to care for anything happening when it such a mass.
It's a shame, because it has so many right pieces for an excellent manga, but the core is just not there.
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