Nebula's Civilization - Ch. 29

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There are more chapters out, fyi. This is really fucking compelling. Conceptually it's very unique. The world is deep. The only thing that is somewhat lacking in my eyes is the perception of the mc as a god. I wish he had performed more distinct miracles like curing disabilities or something along those lines, but I understand from a narrative pov why it doesn't work as well. The time skip element helps a lot in solidifying his position as the god of the black scale tribe since they have relied on him for so long at this point.
 

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