Negai o Kanaete Moraou to Akuma o Shoukan Shitakedo, Kawaikattanode Kekkonshimashita: Akuma no Niidzuma - Vol. 11 Ch. 54 - A Feeling of Being Satisfi…

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feels like it.

however it does also feel like unique story withing this scenario has been told.
further combat scenarios don't make sense. Helvi can just oneshot everything, it has already been done.
new characters trying to steal away Helvi or Theo so that the respective other gets jealous and they save each other? already been done. showing the two being lovey dovey/frisky? already been done. etc etc

of course you could remix all of this umpteenth times, but I would prefer the series to end on a hight note instead of slowly getting bled to death.

so I wouldn't mind it ending with their wedding.
Yeah it feels like the story has told everything that needed to be told.
Personally I'd like to see a timeskip with Theo being strong as in his original wish but I'm assuming the average reader of this series won't be interested.
 
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Some typos that I've noticed: on page 9, the name of the city of Nemophilia is written without "m" in the last speech bubble (... When we get back to Neophilia,"); on page 13, Idehya's name is written as "Idheya" ("Hello, Idheya-san and Inessa-san!"); on page 21, it looks like there's a full stop before the question mark at the bottom panel ("Why are you here? You, girls.?); on page 20, Kress' name is written with two letters "s" ("Kiera-san, Kress-san!") but with only one on page 26 ("Inviting Idehya-san and Inessa-san, Kiera-san and Kres-san...").
With Theo only being 14 (maybe 15 by now) the city name should be spelled with a "P" and a "D" as the 1st and 3rd letters respectively.
 
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Yeah it feels like the story has told everything that needed to be told.
Personally I'd like to see a timeskip with Theo being strong as in his original wish but I'm assuming the average reader of this series won't be interested.
I a thousand years?
 

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