Negative Hero and Demon King's General - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[Reversinator]

@Send_in_the_Killer_Clowns Pardon me, but as someone who worked on the other version, particularly the English text, would it be okay if I asked you how we could improve our text so that it's more engaging?

 

[Dead-chan]

@Reversinator Gimme a moment, I'll direct message you.

 

[Drifter]

Methinks the villagers will come to regret treating her so poorly.

 

[Nohd]

Please dont turn this into an edgy plot of revenge

 

[RyuOdjin]

All of what the hero said reminded me of an NCIS episode where Gibbs told a crime boss, That he doesn't really have any relatives, and he was willing to give the names and addresses of his Three ex-wives

 

[Haremmony]

With how many "isekai/fantasy hero that is subject of mistreatment/betrayal" we have, i'm surprised that this is like the first one that not only kinda poke fun on such cliche, but also have the hero not ended up with obsessive edge or trust-no-one(except-my-own-slaves) demeanor, but instead low self-esteem and pessimistic mindset.

 

[knightcky]

I never get tired of seeing hero and demon king becoming friends in a bunch of mangas

 

[probablyotaku]

omg the most great demon king & hero story

 

[00nowhereman]

this is good, but too short

 

[Wordsmith]

@FrostyCactus
I've read both translations, and while yours definitely needs a someone to check spelling and grammar, I also think that some of the ways you translated things both make more sense and sound better.

Look forward to the next chapter!

 

[ventisca]

The demon lord is a good guy. 🤣

 

[HeisenbergManga]

why does it always have to be a loli?

 

[caesaramd]

@HeisenbergManga i know right

 

[Grimmycoffee]

Just realize, but is that mean the demon is responsible for her parent's death?