Netoge no Yome ga Ninki Idol Datta: Cool kei no Kanojo wa Genjitsu demo Yome no Tsumori de Iru - Vol. 2 Ch. 16 - Rinka's Doki Doki Operation

[r33s3]

Thanks for the pick up. Keep your head up and the good work coming

 

[rfandomization]

well this is definitely different from the web novel... she didn't have the tsun tendencies, and I think I preferred that characterization, even if it's a bit extra on the "fantasy" aspect. That said, it's a story about dating a gamer idol, might as well be all in surely

 

[OnionKnightRises]

Thank you for picking this up. Early on the manga's drama was kinda....shit, but the fact that there's now far more of a comedic tone saves it compared to similar romcoms, so I actually do like this one.

 

[x_s0uls]

Thanks for picking this up. Since your credits page said you accept feedback, I think you need some more experimented proofreading. Many times the dialogs feel way off or are worded weirdly.

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I'll work on my English a little bit. For now, I have a slight problem with writing English sentences instead of understanding Jp

 

[x_s0uls]

fwiw, i'd replace "stereotypical" with "monotonous/monotony" and "manipulation" with "seduction"

i'm sure getting a dedicated pr would fill in the gaps for any issues you're having in regards to sentence flow and the like though, so godspeed bud.

I did have lots of trouble on those 2 words. As the jp ones had their own "meaning", like "マンネリ" (could probably directly be translated as mannerism) and "色仕掛け". So I didn't really know what's the best word for these 2. But sure I can replace with the ones u recommended.

And about getting a dedicated pr, we will think about it.
Thanks for the feedback brother

 

[allaire]

First chapters were more or less alright but it looks like now we're getting straight into the "one (1) kiss in the last chapters due" lane. This is getting too dumb.

 

[banjomarx]

Thanks for the translation, i don't get what she wants? There married but still in highschool and can't do literally anything physical?

she self destructed

 

[dreamsreaper]

TYSM gambare

 

[GrumpyGizmo]

Good luck.