Next Life

[genderbenderbb2]

@hyrule13 Ah, all right then, I'll leave it in your hands then.

 

[GrimGriefer]

@hyrule13 Whats an editor to do? Check translation quality or clean/set text bubbles?

 

[hyrule13]

@GrimGriefer It's a really rough series to redraw mainly.

 

[GrimGriefer]

@hyrule13 Oh. If it was just cleaning the bubbles and setting new text in there, I could of helped with this series. Redrawing would be too much time invested lol

 

[hyrule13]

@GrimGriefer I just had an editor go full time for my group yesterday, he'll be working on a oneshot, finishing off a volume of something a reader paid for, and then working on Next Life.

 

[Arisu0404]

Where's the first couple of chapters?

 

[Jenst]

Cry baby mc, i guess thats typical of isekai trash

 

[WeeBDestroyer]

@hyrule13 I'll hold you to that.. if you need help wouldn't mind giving a hand

 

[hyrule13]

@WeebDestroyer I actually have 7 chapters in the QC phase currently, just been out of it really bad the last week or so.

 

[WeeBDestroyer]

@hyrule13 I see, understandable brother, take all the time of the world

 

[Ruzand]

as the cover looks like I have thought this is some kind of drama, slice of life something like that hahaha

 

[kahrie]

Someone translate this poease 😭😭

 

[marconii2002]

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[Stonewoof]

@marconii2002 It is completely possible this will never be translated again, but if Imanity Scans say they will deliver then I personally am okay with waiting; as long as it's a good release that is. Hey at least it's giving a chance for the raws to release so we have more to look forward to.

Maybe it's just me being hopeful, but I'm sure Imanity Scans is trying really hard behind the scenes, so thank you for your hard work!

 

[marconii2002]

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[xeno77]

is it just me or chapter 1 doesn't work i reopened it over 5 times and it didn't work
after i wrote that it worked lol

 

[Darkmint13]

This is an okay isekai but major things seem to happen and then get brushed under the rug.

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like the MC getting raped which added nothing to the manga at all. If you take it out and nothing changes, it wasn't worth adding.

It's like the manga wanted to be more than what it was but just couldn't get there. Nothing seems to really have weight or a feeling of tension either. They should've just went all in on the slice of life. If you take out the Duke part and just merge the chapter before and after that you really can't tell that there's anything missing. That's not what you want in a story.

 

[zapper01]

what happend after arlune demon atk to other solider? also duke.... its not in manga

 

[Roadrunner9000]

its your basic simpy isekai mc transported into a world thats similar to a game he plays and he is in the body of his game avatar

i will give him props for actualy checking out his own magic power before using the spells in a do or die situation and the fl and the supporting charackters are nice...
but thats about it... the plot is convoluted and the author has the mc slinging words around without knowing the real meaning behind them
i for one wouldn't be surprised if the author has never played a single mmorpg which would explain his apparent lack knowledge on it
for e.g. hallucination and transformation are two entirely different things unless the author would go through the trouble of redefining it but he redefined hallucination as illusion which granted is closer but still not nearly the same.
then their are a ton of illogical events happening like

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everyone accepting how a seasoned warrior dies instantly from falling of a horse you do know that bargaining anger and refusing to accept are among the 5 stages of grief don't you?
or the mc getting raped which should have killed him by the by (sucked dry his vitality and magic)
or the cautious noble believing a one sided story from people he doesnt realy trust or had hunted...
or the mc discovering inhuman practices but ignores it so there could be a save the damsel in distress situation
or considering the female demons ability why they would hunt the fl in the first place....

and all of those headshaking illogical events just get sweeped under a rock

not to mention that the mc could have just fixed everything a couple of chapters earlier and that is already ignoring that the mc could just have exterminated the god damn castle but never even considers it... its not so much that he doesn't do it what bothered me it's that he doesn't even considers it...

all in all it may not contain a trope-a-rama like your usual isekai fantasy
and i would realy realy like to like this one because i like the base story and the initial encounter probably way more than i should but the rest is just subpar
on average 1-2 times every chapter there is a "what the hell" moment where i had to re read to make sure that I didn't read it wrong which frankly ruined my immersion

5/10 and that mainly because i happen to like the art

 

[yeahhhhhhhhno]

I dropped this after the MC literally got raped and shrugged it off like it was nothing. Please tell me what I'm not missing out on