Thanks for the TL
To answer the question about page 10, I would say that the tl is good.
Here's how I would tl it for comparison (note that some of this is both personal preference and the fact that I've seen your translation first)
Not only am i scared of what others would think if they saw the way i lived,
but the things I love are denied and attacked
And yet, when it comes to being having confidence in myself...
I'm so weak...!
*No changes
The things I love and my correct self have all been decided
*No changes